Trapped In A Straitjacket

[swrazor]

Hi sara yes I bought the divine doctor and drugged damsels. I found that the scenes lacked the sleepy discriptions that your stories the psychward and straitjacket had. I know thats vauge but it's hard to describe what pushes my buttons and why some stories do and some don't.

That is not a critisicm however, because I realize you are appealing to a much wider audience. I might try the ones you suggested from smash mouth. just to see.

Thanks for replying.

swrazor

[Sara_Quill]

I'm not taking it as critizism at all! Writing can be quite a lonely activity so I love getting feedback from my readers, especially if their feedback makes my stories better and makes the sleepy scenes hotter!

I really want to understand what you're after, yet I'm not really sure if I'm understand you correctly. Is it okay if I ask you a few questions to try and figure it out?

Is it maybe that you like the sedatives that don't knock somebody out completely so you have a prolonged period of impaired consciousness?

Could you maybe point to or copy and paste the sentences or paragraphs that you mean, maybe that helps to clarify it?

[swrazor]

yes I will but i don't want to use this main board and clog this thread with our correspondents. So i will send a private message. or if you have an email we can correspond that way.

swrazor