The Breakdown

[swrazor]

The thunder rolled and lightning lit up the night sky, like heavenly strobe lights, as two young woman walked toward a secluded bar. Rain was peppering lightly but not yet pouring. They walk into a moderately lit bar area, where a bartender is buffing a bar counter. He turns, eyeballing the visitors briefly, when he sees the two ladies walk in.

One of the young women is a blonde. She has on a light blue sweat shirt and light blue jeans. She also has on a white winter type coat. It is big and bulky, making her look slightly inflated. It has a hood and this hood has tan, thick fur adorning it's edges. Her hair is long, straight and shiny. Small blue eyes, draw attention to her adorably, oval shaped face. She looked to be between the ages of 18 through 20. Her smile looked innocent, as she flashed it at the other girl. Both women approached the bar moments later.

The other girl has long wavy hair. It is dark and falls down to the middle of her back. She looks older, Maybe late twenties. She is wearing a turquoise v-cut tank top, gray jeans and a thin leather jacket. She is the one who speaks first to the bar tender.

"Hi. Perhaps you can help us. Our car broke down up the road. Do you have a phone we could use? Our cell phones are dead and we need to call a tow truck."

"Certainly." The man replies.

"Oh thanks so much! By the way, My name is Beth and this is my sister Ally. She is shy."

"Hi." The blonde says, timidly.

"Nice to meet you both. My name is Johnathan."

The girls both smile and nod, thinking how cute the guy is. Beth then uses his phone to find and call a tow service. When she finishes, she hands the phone back to Johnathan, thanking him again.

She then turns to her sister and says, "Well we got a tow truck but he says he doesn't give rides, so we still have to find a way back to our motel."

Just then, Jonathan speaks up and says, "I could give you a ride. I need to clean up and close first but you two could have a drink while waiting. It should not be too long a wait."

Realizing this is their best and frankly, only option, they agree.

After a while Jonathan finishes his duties and ask if Beth and Ally are ready to go. The two had just finished the soda's they'd ordered and confirmed that they were indeed, ready to go. It had already been a long night and they were tired and looking forward to being in their cozy motel room. The rain was still not falling and the thunder was more distant, as they walked outside and got into Jonathan's car.

Soon the two women were on their way home... Or so they thought...

As they traveled, Ally began to feel sleepy in the back of the car. Her eyelids felt heavy and didn't want to re-open when she would blink. Her head kept trying to loll around and she was struggling to keep it steady. Meanwhile, Beth was noticing her sibling's battle. In truth, she herself was getting tired but blamed it on the late hour.

Beth spoke to her sister, who now looked to be asleep or near sleep. "Ally wake up... We will be getting out soon... Come on hun. Wake up..." Beth didn't notice her on voice beginning to drag. Ally's head was slumped, her long golden locks hanging as limp as the rest of her was. "Ally... Wake up..." Beth said again, lifting Ally's head and clearing hair out of her face.

Ally finally opened her eyes but they rolled drowsily, as she attempted to turn and look at her sister. "Sssorrry sis... I'mmmm juuusss soooo sssleepy..." Ally mumbled drowsily.

"I know... Buuut trry and sstay awake okayyy..." Beth's own eyes rolled as she spoke, though she did not no it and Ally was trying hard to keep herself awake but was failing. Her blonde head eventually just plopped on Beth's shoulder, as her body slumped and fell into her sibling. The older girl had more staying power than her sister did and was fighting the roofie hard.

Johnathan was watching all of this take place through the rear view mirror. He reveled in the state the two young women were in. One was deeply asleep, while the other bobbed and swayed her head and rolled her eyes back, as she fought to remain awake. In fact she kept fighting, the entire trip back to his house.

Beth groaned, as Johnathan opened the rear car door. Her dark eyes looked sleepy and rolled in a state of near unconsciousness. She groggily protests when Johnathan tries to take a slumbering Ally out of her drowsy embrace. "Hey... Whayooooou dooooiiing?... Mmmmm... Leave herrralonnnne..." Even while groggy, Beth is battling Johnathan fairly vigorously, trying to protect her sister. He soon realizes that he won't be able to retrieve Ally as easy as he thought.

"I'm not going to hurt your little sister gorgeous. I'm just going to take her to bed. In fact, you yourself should already be asleep. Perhaps you need a little help." Johnathan says, as he pours some ether onto a cloth and then puts it over a helpless Beth's nose and mouth.

"Mmmmuuuuhhhh... Mmmmuuuuhhhh... The beauty is already sedated and so she can't really fight. She sleepily swipes at Johnathan's arm repeatedly but these blows have no effect. A few seconds and many eye rolls later, the lovely brunette is out cold, just like her sister.

With Beth now out and out of the way, Johnathan easily pulls a limp, lifeless Ally from the car. She never stirs or awakens at all, when he drapes her over his shoulder. Her arms just swing lazily, as he turns and carries the blonde girl in the house.

Moments later, he returns for Beth. She is limp against the car seat, her head turned to the right. "alright babe. It is your turn sweetheart." He says, turning her face towards him and clearing some hair away. Scooping her from the car, he chooses to carry the older sister into the house cradle style. Just like Ally, she never moves or stirs.

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[larrydude]

Very good story!!!!!!!!!

[swrazor]

thank you. Quick question Larry, do you allow stories with celebrities as subjects or must characters be fictional?

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[larrydude]

It's not my decision, But i think it's wise to leave them fictional.