Prison Guard Part 4

[swrazor]

my only suggestion would be that there were missed opportunities to really describe the pass out. Choosing instead to just say she went out x minutes later. Just my 2 cents.

Swrazor

[CBiscuit]

This stories "Prison Guard" and "Waitress" were actually written for my "Tales Of The Cloth" section at Slumberville a long time ago. The readers there at the time were more concerned with how many times the girl could be knocked out, and only needed the first knock out to be a long one. I just posted these as filler until I could get around to writing some newer and more suitable stuff for this site. These are still finding newer and younger readers here just as they are so it's a plus in the end.

Keep in mind I have had to keep this section going all alone for several years until just recently! I have had to fill in with older material since I have a very demanding day job with long hours! The newer stories have the elements you discussed, and as more are written even more so. There will be more bondage, drugged drinks, and ripping as well. Now that others are finally writing here, I can take time out to do all new stuff.

I will post the remaining parts of these 2 older stories, however these will be the last of the older stories I will use here.

[CBiscuit]

Here are some things others here may find interesting. When the Slumberville website opened, it was an extension of the existing late 1990's "Chloroforum." They wanted a sleepy stories section and I volunteered. They were only concerned about sleepy and not so much about bondage.

The forum mostly discussed TV and Movie knock outs, since very few commercial videos existed then and there were no downloads yet. They highly praised any episode where the girl was knocked out more than once.

Prison Guard was my first story there. I was kind of dared by forum posters as to how many times a girl put be put under in an episode. The overwhelming preference among posters was for girl on girl KO's. The foot fetish area was also heavily requested to be covered, as well as "get this!" small breasts at times.

OK, I started trying to please everyone. I used the woman's prison for the girl on girl set up. I made Kim an undercover cop so she could be the knocked out heroine. I made Mindy older, since the older matron putting the young girl under sent those guys over the edge.

Then I wrote the basic story. I went back into it 3 times and added extra knock outs. That numbers challenge again. At first Kim was ko'd once in the holding cell. Then I had Mindy get interrupted and she got 2 KO's in there before even reaching the TU. Then over and over again once there. They wanted dust mask scenes with slow pass outs, gas mask scenes, full nudity, and lots and lots of the cloth.

OK, I wrote this as a composite "custom story" for the main body of readers of the forum at that time. At the end I got worried as to how I could top this in Part 2! Then I added Allison so that in the next part, 2 girls could get it over and over again, and oh yes, yet another request, to be forced to cloth each other.

Now what to call the stories section?? I was transferring a History Channel Marathon of the TV Series "Tales Of The Gun" for a co-worker that collected guns and didn't have cable. As I sat at the PC writing Prison Guard, the TV across the room kept repeating the title Tales Of The Gun over and over. Finally it hit me. Why not "Tales Of The Cloth!"

Words can't describe the response when the site changed over and the Tales Of The Cloth section appeared with Prison Guard as the first story. It was everything the readers wanted and then some and PS, they loved the section title too.

CBiscuit was out of the gate and running in the story races!

That all seems like ages ago now, and of course the tastes of the readers here has evolved somewhat. That will all work itself out in time though.

[balor]

Thanks for the history of Slumberville and the Chloroforum! I only joined there in like 2005, right as the forum itself was starting to ramp up, so it's interesting to hear of the evolution.

To be honest, I have to say that I always did somehow prefer your earlier work, specifically, the original Tales of the Cloth series compared to say the prowlers arc (which is not to say the prowlers stuff isn't great, but...). I think perhaps it's the early variety of knockouts as compared to the mostly purely chloro work later. Anyhow, to me, your name will always be synonymous with sleepy stories, so please please, somehow, keep finding time to write =)